In literacy we have pinched Mrs Lee's and Miss Hunt's ideas of using a magical polishing pen to improve our writing. It has worked amazingly! We have made soooo many improvements and our writing is brilliant. We worked in pairs, with our magic polishing pens to add in chunks, use better words and different punctuation. | |
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Kai
1/17/2013 10:19:58 pm
Cool i'll be telling Mrs Mulroy about that maybe we could use it
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Miss Magor
1/18/2013 12:36:04 am
Kai, I think that's a fab idea and I'm sure Mrs Mulroy will love it. In fact, I've actually already ordered your class a set of magic polishing pens in preparation.
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harvey
1/18/2013 02:42:06 am
polishing pen workes alot even to correct your work
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Miss Magor
1/18/2013 02:52:52 am
We could do with a polishing pen for you with that last post Harvey, punctuation!! Ha :)
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Chloe
1/18/2013 03:47:02 am
I think we need a set of polishing pens in Mrs Mulroys literacy class because they would probably work
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Miss Magor
1/18/2013 04:44:04 am
They would definitely work! You should read some of my classes writing today, it's AWESOME!
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harvey
1/18/2013 04:23:11 pm
polashing pens do work for putting extra information in your writing
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Jack l
1/19/2013 04:14:57 am
Them pens work today
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Baker
1/19/2013 05:11:10 am
The polishing pens worked a lot on my work they must be magic they were awesome
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Chloe
1/22/2013 06:56:37 pm
i cant wait till we get some
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Mrs Mu,roy
1/23/2013 05:26:32 am
Watch out 5JM because the polishing pens will me making their first appearance very soon. So I'm expecting a lot of magic by the end of the week!
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Amelia
1/24/2013 01:42:22 am
We used them today they really do work!
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Emily
1/24/2013 05:17:51 pm
polishin pens are cool:):):):):)
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Jake
1/24/2013 05:20:44 pm
Polishing pens are cool.
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